I wanted to keep to shapes, shapes, shapes. I think I still need to work some on values. I need a few really really darks. I also think it may still be a bit "busy". The neat thing on Yupo is that you can make those changes quite easily.
I think your eye goes to the Taco sign first and I want to thread your eye down to the umbrella and through the painting. It is a warmer painting and mostly I want to entertain the eye with interesting textures and shapes. I am sure you can see how much I am influenced by George James. Some shapes were scraped out with a credit card. Some were lifted with stencils. I am nuts about umbrellas.
This piece is about 12 x 15 on translucent Yupo.